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IELTS · TASK 2 ⏱ 40 minutos 📝 250+ palabras
Some people believe that universities should focus on academic subjects only, while others think they should also offer practical skills training. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Pensá en estructura: intro · view 1 · view 2 · tu opinión · conclusión.
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Checklist Band 8
  • Estructura clara (intro/body/conclusion)
  • 250+ palabras
  • Linking words variados
  • Vocabulario académico avanzado
  • Estructuras gramaticales complejas
Overall Band
7.5
Task Response
7.5
Coherence
8.0
Lexical
7.0
Grammar
7.0

Issues a corregir

concentrate exclusively onfocus solely on
Lexical · más natural en academic writing
has been a growing debatehas emerged an ongoing debate
Lexical · vocabulario más Band 8
many people contend thatproponents of this view argue that
Coherence · linking más sofisticado

Vocab upgrades sugeridos

importantindispensable / paramount
job marketemployment landscape
real-world applicationpractical applicability
well-rounded graduatesversatile, employment-ready graduates

Rewrite as BAND 8

In recent decades, an ongoing debate has emerged regarding whether universities should focus solely on academic disciplines, or whether they ought to incorporate practical skills training into their curricula. While some maintain that higher education exists primarily to cultivate intellectual rigour, proponents of vocational integration argue that practical preparation is equally indispensable. In my view, a synthesis of both approaches yields the most compelling outcome.

On one hand, advocates of a purely academic model contend that universities serve to foster critical inquiry, deep scholarship, and original research. Furthermore, they posit that vocational instruction belongs more appropriately within technical institutes...